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Mother Nature rises from the deep
She looks around and begins to weep
Her heart aches with grief and pain
Her tears become sheets of rain
They pour onto the polluted ground
Her treasures lost, never to be found
Mankind wrecks and destroy
As they forget everything, even joy
The beauty of nature, the love for plants
Blood is spilled, the bloodthirsty hunt
Continues on unstopped, hurting others relentlessly
Yet even as her tears fall unceasingly,
A patch of clam remains among the raging motion
A tiny oasis amidst a stormy grey ocean

Mother Nature rises from the deep…
:iconfukaimorimidori:
The actual title is "Mother Nature Rises from the Deep".

We're abusing her, and she's angry. That's why all the weird things are happening now. Tsunamis, earthquakes, strange weather patterns...

That's why the Earth is going to end soon...



Talk about emo. ^^" But I'm really very sensitive about this enviromental thingy. I'm doing my best for the moment; y'know the 3Rs etc. I don't even eat shark fins soup anymore. (I used to like the dish. But now, my little brother just grabs for my share, so I guess he's happy I've turned into a tree-hugging freak. )

I submitted this for a Humanites Week competition in school, along with the photo for. This is under Geography, like global warming etc.
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~BrokenPieces22679 Jun 10, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
that's saaaaad... =*( but thoughtful and makes you think yourself...
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~ctosorio Aug 1, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
Deeply insightful and emotive, incredibly expressive. You used the aesthetic resources of these metaphors really well: heart, tears, treasures and blood.

The text is simple, clear and solid. Really a pure and defined style, very well done. You got it...

It¿s difficult to say too much in too short text and with that pure deep style, and you did it. I have some texts by this Deep Ecologist style in my :gallery: and I would thank you an advanced critique on them, please.
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:iconfukaimorimidori:
Thanks! :) That's the best comment I can ever get for my literacy works. Frankly, I'm very bad at commenting. but I'll give it my best.
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i agree i'm wit u i can't comment and i'm a tree hugging freak
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Mood: Joy ~ctosorio Aug 2, 2007  Hobbyist Photographer
And maybe ou should explore a little more on those Deep-Ecologist insights, they're powerful and you have a gentle style writing.... ;P
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